Thursday, November 3, 2011

Comments for Kids

   Sounds like you're very rich to afford all that, but I would be scared about being robbed, murdered, or kidnapped if I was that rich. Wouldn't you???

    I really like your smurf story. Smurfs are blue, but I think purple or pink is a better color for them.

   This was a really awesome story! It really got my attention. This is a good example of cyber bulling and that you can't trust anyone with your password. Not even your best friend.

   Your story was really funny, but just like Marlene said, It was weird that Agent P was your sister. I also felt a little bad that you died.

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